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Pocky game series: AmericaXReader


"Alright ____! It's time to play a game with the Hero!" Alfred yells.

"Ugh Alfred, shut up. I'm not in the mood." You say, throwing a pillow at him (which he dodges). You were at Alfred's house after school. He invited you over so you thought you might as well stay for a while, him being your crush after all, how could you say no?

But after staying up until 3 in the morning surfing the web and not getting enough sleep, it was getting to you. You didn't mean to be aggressive towards Alfred.

"Come on ____! You have to!" He exclaims.

"Nnn....no!" You regret the words as soon as they came out.

"Isn't that a little rude, I invite you to spend time with me at my house and you fall sleep on me! Not cool dude." You could hear the hurt in his voice.

"Fine! I'll play your game Alfred!" You say, getting off the couch. You didn't want the cute American angry at you. He was too cute to say no to anyway. His golden blonde hair with an ahoge, the restless blue eyes that hid behind his glasses, his loud voice, his craving for hamburgers, everything!

"AWWW yeah!" He fist pumps. "We're gonna play the pocky game!"

"Sure, how do you play it." You ask, clearly bored. Alfred, however, was oblivious of your mood. He tears opens a box of chocolate pocky, which grabs your attention. Chocolate is your favorite!
"Gimme!" You attempt to grab a stick from Alfred's hand but fail.

"No! We have to play the game first!" And with that he puts the stick in his mouth.  He moves it around with his teeth, teasing you.

Seeing this as a challenge, you hastily bite the other end. "Don't think you're gonna win Alfred!"
He smirks. "The Hero ALWAYS wins ____!"

You two look into each other's eyes while biting the pocky stick, making you blush. As you got to the middle, you notice a bit of chocolate on Alfred's lips.

What I wouldn't give to kiss those lips... you think. Suddenly the pocky stick is yanked away. Alfred finished the small bit that was left and laughs.

"Haha ____! I told you I'd win! The Hero always wins! Hahaha-

His obnoxious laugh was cut off by you grabbing his face and fastening your lips onto his. Caught off guard, he topples over onto the floor with you on top. All you could taste was chocolate in his kiss. Alfred was confused at first, but he grinned and kissed you back harder. He wraps his arms around your waist and you tangle your fingers in his blonde hair.  After a few second, he was the first to break away.

"Alfred, I- You try to explain but he presses a finger to your lips.

"Hey, _____. Did I mention the Hero always gets the girl too?"

"....."

Alfred grins. Thank you, pocky!
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Mewcat21 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
Alfred you cocky little hamburger....... XD
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Lizzels199 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Student General Artist
Haha what? XD
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sweetheartkit Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
what happened to the prussia one?
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toshikiii Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015  Student General Artist
If u still wanna read it, I put the prussia fanfic back up lol
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toshikiii Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Student General Artist
I put it in my storage because I didn't really like it XD
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sweetheartkit Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
are you going to make a new one? :iconsexyprussia2plz:
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toshikiii Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Probably not :U 
I want to do writing commissions so then maybe I can get something in return for writing a fanfic lol
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sweetheartkit Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I can draw you something but thats about it if you want me to I'll do my best to write you something I normaly don't write stuff like what you do but hey there is always a first for something but if you want points then I'm stumped I have no money and I have only been DA for a few months.
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toshikiii Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Yeah I kind of wanted points or money so I can use them as prizes for a contest XD 
That's okay though. I mean, maybe I can write something if I have motivation. 
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sweetheartkit Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
cool.
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CaramellDancenGirl Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Professional Writer
"thank you pocky" xD
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roseyohrt Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sweet
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everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Pocky is amazing and the chocolate ones are the best hehehe :D I love Chocolate Pocky~! I also love this~!
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RoronoaZoro65543 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
Oh my god.... I think I'm dead.... TOO MANY FEELS!!! :iconthefeelsplz:
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emlzthenerd Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
:iconsexyamerica2plz: oh how we all love Alfred! Thank you pocky!!!
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HoodieSlenderverse Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfrenchsquealplz: Im a HUGEEE America fan so DREAM CAME TRUE BITCHES!*Holding America behind me, middle finger to everyone*
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:iconranmas2:
ranmas2 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
:iconrazycryplz::iconlazycryplz::iconhandspazzplz::iconfrenchsquealplz::iconsqueeeeplz::iconimdedplz::iconifaintplz::iconfantasyblushplz::iconsoulnosebleedplz::iconblushhplz::iconletmehugyouplz::iconsupertackleplz::iconsupertighthugplz::iconbrohugplz::iconoldschoolownedplz::icondeanspazplz: Sorry, but I just read all of your Pocky Game stories and.. I think I'm dead
These are so amazingly cute and adorable and sweet and awesome and andand-:iconexplodeplz:
In short- I love you for making these.:iconlazypoolplz:
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toshikiii Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student General Artist
Awesome! Glad you like them! :D
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ranmas2 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
Yes, very much ^^
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PrincessDarknight Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yay chocolate pocky and America! :D :squee:
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Ayano-Otori Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
too cute!
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IdgitWolf Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
LOL! Thank you pocky!! XD
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toshikiii Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you for enjoying my work and all the comments!! :heart:
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tweeterstwin Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
But HE pulled away meaning i win!
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Jesserfly Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
OMFG Chocolate Pocky AND Alfred?! Double win! SCOOORE 8D
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Prettyxmouse Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I feel so... :iconsqueeeeplz:!!!!~
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Kuromi1234 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I want this to happen to me! Damn it Alfred F. Jones, why aren't you real! XD
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NyanCat001 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Ah, reality, how you torment us..~ :iconangrysmileplz:
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Kuromi1234 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yup.
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toshikiii Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Student General Artist
I think everyone wants this to happen to them :heart:including me
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Kuromi1234 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yup, you got a point there XD
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kikuhondaismineeee Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
frenchsquealplz
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kikuhondaismineeee Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
whops !! wrong thing !!! sorry!!! I ,3 ur story and the hero always gets the lady!!! ;)
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HiddenTourturedHeart Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhandspazzplz:
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pigment1q Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
DAAWWW HOW CUTE!!!
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toshikiii Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks XD
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pigment1q Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
np
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
He's so adorkable.
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AmericasGF24960 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
SO AMAZING~!!
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toshikiii Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Gracias~! xD
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AmericasGF24960 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
no prob, dude! wait are u 2? if u are, THATS AWESOME! Im Mexican! ^^
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Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
yay America! ^^ you should make a Canada one :iconpweaseplz:
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toshikiii Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm working on it XD
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Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
woot!! :D
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animeandmangadrawer Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
an u plz make a Canada one ?
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toshikiii Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Maybe, in the future :meow:
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Yuki-the-Trickster Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student General Artist
............. AHHHHHH!!!! I'm spazzing out! This is amazing! THANK YOU POCKY!!!
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toshikiii Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Shyeah! XD
Thanks!
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